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HP thoughts
Jun. 25th, 2003 03:50 am8 hours later...
Upon reading the first page: My, but JKR has gotten wordy. Can you say "bloat?" (She does get better when not describing settings though.)
Blimey, Harry, lay off the Caps Lock. Those fifteen-year-old hormones are no good for him at all.
HAHA! I'm one of the few fanartists to get Cho's hair right! HAHAHA!
I see JKR's smart enough not to pull the "Harry can't quite place where he's heard the name..." for long; she knows we've all scrutinized the books long enough to memorize every single detail. =P
( SPOILERS )
And last of all, regardless of any other flaws in her writing, kudos to JKR for capturing the teenage mentality perfectly, as usual.
Upon reading the first page: My, but JKR has gotten wordy. Can you say "bloat?" (She does get better when not describing settings though.)
Blimey, Harry, lay off the Caps Lock. Those fifteen-year-old hormones are no good for him at all.
HAHA! I'm one of the few fanartists to get Cho's hair right! HAHAHA!
I see JKR's smart enough not to pull the "Harry can't quite place where he's heard the name..." for long; she knows we've all scrutinized the books long enough to memorize every single detail. =P
( SPOILERS )
And last of all, regardless of any other flaws in her writing, kudos to JKR for capturing the teenage mentality perfectly, as usual.
