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nendil ([personal profile] nendil) wrote2010-05-11 07:54 am
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Specific question, guys.


See the edge of wolf-Link's cliff that's running into the other side of the picture at the bottom? Should it connect with the ledge on the other side of the boundary? I'm favoring it not do so, because they're actually two different perspectives, but I'm wondering if I'm creating a tangent nonetheless.

(Don't mind the weird coloring on Ammy, I shifted her position after the fact. It'll all be fixed!)
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[personal profile] summercomfort 2010-05-11 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm super confused. :(

[identity profile] nendil.livejournal.com 2010-05-11 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
D:

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This bit. Should those two parts line up completely, or not at all? (Or okay as is?)
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[personal profile] summercomfort 2010-05-11 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
It looks fine as it is...
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[personal profile] summercomfort 2010-05-11 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh wait, is that supposed to be one ledge or two? I read it as one ledge...

[identity profile] nendil.livejournal.com 2010-05-11 08:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I could make it one ledge, but as it is right now they're not the same ledge. So I'm going to try either making it one ledge or taking something out entirely.
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[personal profile] torkell 2010-05-11 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
I think that they should either line up, or it should be an obvious difference. At the moment they almost line up and it looks a bit odd, especially as there are other elements that cross the boundary which do line up (e.g. the dark blob just above Wolf!Link's left ear, the tip of the cliff that Ammy is standing on).

[identity profile] nendil.livejournal.com 2010-05-11 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
That's exactly what I figured. I'll play around with things some more. Thanks!

[identity profile] elemnar.livejournal.com 2010-05-11 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I read somewhere that having two things almost-but-not-quite touching (like the ledges at the moment) draws the viewer's attention to the space between them and this is bad, or something.

I'm looking forward to seeing this finished though! zelda + okami = win + win :D

[identity profile] nendil.livejournal.com 2010-05-11 09:41 pm (UTC)(link)
That would be the tangents (http://emptyeasel.com/2008/11/18/avoiding-tangents-9-visual-blunders-every-artist-should-watch-out-for/) I was talking about, so they are going away one way or the other!

And I can't wait to see this finished too, I wish I could just skip the inbetween bits :D

[identity profile] ctrl-a.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 06:49 am (UTC)(link)
I say they should connect, since both the sun and the river seem to match up.
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