Beta-reading time...!
( Only the first chapter? This is gonna take forever, ya lazy bum )
Any and all comments welcome, no matter how inane or nitpicky, but preferably constructive and/or editorial and/or analytical. This is not the "official" publishing so I'm looking for necessary changes.
( Only the first chapter? This is gonna take forever, ya lazy bum )
Any and all comments welcome, no matter how inane or nitpicky, but preferably constructive and/or editorial and/or analytical. This is not the "official" publishing so I'm looking for necessary changes.